Reality Is My Estate: On the Work of Jane Augustine
Born in 1931 in Berkeley, Augustine published her first poems at 7 (in the Berkeley Daily Gazette) and her first book of poetry, Arbor Vitae (2002), at 71. In the decades between came college (Bryn Mawr class of ‘52, Seven College Conference Scholar), marriage, children (four), mid-life divorce, and happy remarriage (to the renowned poet and critic Michael Heller). Augustine completed her Ph.D. at City University in 1988. By the 1990s, she was publishing the definitive critical edition of H.D.’s Moravian childhood memoir, The Gift (1998), which established her as a scrupulous scholar and editor. Since then, she has published a steady stream of creative and critical works. She has twice received Fellowships in Poetry from the New York State Council on the Arts and received the H.D. Fellowship at the Beinecke Library, Yale University.
Augustine’s poetry is distinguished by its bold stance — wide open to the world, observant, and concise in its details. Her work is as elegant and forthright as Augustine herself. It is not as austere as some of the modernist poets she admires most, but often similarly sculptural, and highly attuned to poetry’s music. As an exercise, try reading aloud such lines as the following from the first poem in the selection, “At Mid-month”—
But you know
ripeness is not all is stasis
binds
bursts
noting, as you read, the sonic power of the lines, which open on the alliterative “b’s” and the pitch of the long assonantal i’s. The passage is spare in words and punctuated by spatial pauses for breath, features enhancing the forcefulness of the sonic and visual effects. Its claim is to a feminine power as defined by more than fertility. Surely this notion is more than a moment’s insight, yet as Augustine counsels in her droll “Momentary Manifesto,” “leave things as they are,” and “know no thing more than for its instant.” Then she’s off to contemplate mortality: “Time for a walk / to lean on the graveyard fence.”
As homage to this marvelous scholar-poet’s erudition, I asked if she’d include her remarkable dream-poem about H.D., “My H.D.” You will note that nesting in the complex dream-narrative of the prose poem are italicized lines quoted from H.D.’s greatest poems (both of which are war poems), Trilogy and Helen in Egypt. There are also respectful references to H.D.’s wartime involvement in Spiritualism, when she believed fervently that she was receiving spirit-messages which, once conveyed to the powers that be, would end the war. In addition is Augustine’s fascinating account of the eerie experience of finding a clipping of her own undergraduate article on H.D. in a student journal (H.D. also attended Bryn Mawr), written so long ago it was as if by someone else: “je est une autre,” as Augustine quips (pace Rimbaud). H.D.’s daughter, Perdita Schaffner, had clipped out the article and kept it in her files, now held in the archives of the Beinecke Library at Yale, where Augustine happened upon it decades later.
Known for her poetic “investigative eye,” as Anne Waldman describes Augustine’s poetry of witness, and the spare “luminosity” of her verse, as Patricia Hampl notes, Augustine has gained recognition in recent years as a socially-engaged and mindful poet who follows her own manifesto’s poetic counsel. A splendid illustration of this vein in her poetry is the tour de force serial poem, “The Man Who Sleeps Under the Scaffold.” The poem concerns a bitter winter in 2018, during a time when veterans were actually disparaged by the president. Augustine tracks the whereabouts of a homeless veteran who sleeps near her apartment building (although by day, he treks to Trump Tower). The veteran is one of thousands of people freezing, surviving, “unnoticed . . . / in plain view.” “It’s not right—,” Augustine avers, “but someone must see[.]” As the veteran puts it, bluntly, in his imagined address to the president, “I am an American veteran of wars abroad, / who sleeps concealed as trash [. . . ] / outside of your real estate.” And as Augustine herself poignantly states at the poem’s conclusion, “Mr. President, / I am an American woman[ . . .] / [who] claims reality as my estate” (emphasis added).
I hope that after reading the eloquent exploratory poems featured here, you will pick up a copy of Traverse, in order to read into the poetry of Jane Augustine more deeply. For now, I invite you to savor this selection, as I have done readying this feature.
Poems from Traverse
At Mid-month
Ripening in my darkness
every month
not a red moon to reduce me
to useful function
nor a wound to stopper
with bandages
—I say a woman is not a myth
not an emergency ward
not an empty cup to be filled
blest—
it thickens one silk layer quilted
over another
a fine soft place our warmth
the child-bed
every man wants to be brought to.
But you know
ripeness is not all is stasis
binds
bursts unable to ask
the next question:
time then to undo
throw away
bits of string clips bands
the lump of petrified wood
in the desk drawer everything
we save
thinking someday it may save us,
slough off
with only a slight pang
all those prized sentiments
and start over. I’m glad to move
into another house
carpeting curtaining —a chance
to “make it new.”
Just as glad to say goodbye
to a lover,
pack a knapsack, move on
So at mid-month I pitch my tent
in a deep valley,
listen to its rivers
underground:
new blood rising
to feed
to shed.
Gentians
near the Sangre de Cristos,
after the accidental death
of Robert Secora, 17
A purple gash
in the oat-fields’ wide green
spread out below still-snowy mountains—
Barbed wire blocks us:
gingerly I lower it
for the ranch foreman’s wife to step over.
We wade across
to gaze down into the fringed cups
lit, it seems, by the earth’s dark blood.
She tells me how
they had to send away the homeless boy
who later fell under the blade at Canda’s sawmill—
the ranch’s owner
wouldn’t take him in
so how could they? She says
“Did you ever see
so many gentians? I used to find just one
or two. We might as well pick plenty—
tomorrow they cut
these oats—see, the kernel’s
just coming out of the splitting pod—”
Note in a Sketchbook
Grapevine and bittersweet
intertwine. Bugs eat both. Veins
show intricate
against light, yellow
at edges. No end to tight
grasping tendrils, drying,
stray twigs caught.
Momentary Manifesto
To leave things as they are.
To write something every day.
To know no thing more
than for its instant.
Whiff of earth in the air.
Phone number on a scratch pad.
Quick! Time for a walk
to lean on the graveyard fence.
My H.D.
(Hilda Doolittle, 1886-1961, poet and novelist)
Jane Augustine reading an excerpt from The Man Who Sleeps Under the Scaffold
The Man Who Sleeps Under the Scaffold
East 18th Street and First Avenue, New York City
(i)
Saw him last week
late night—
now it’s 19 degrees (where is he sleeping?)
His gear roped under
black tarps and bags
in a shopping cart
includes a sign
upside down (no other writing)
“Hope for the future” (not much)
(ii)
Blizzard covers the city.
White fills the streets.
Scaffold protects the black
packaging of his life (he is resourceful)
He will come back—when?
to live if the weather (New York City)
lets him. If
they don’t decide
to bring down right now
the empty building (when will they?)
the scaffold upholds,
not a place
to live anyhow, now
or in the future (impersonal)
but a hospital to help,
offices maybe, or labs (but not beds)
(iii)
Haven’t seen him
recently – gray rain-suit,
hooded face, grizzled.
Thousands not seen
note unnoticed spots
in plain view,
cover themselves
with black garbage bags—
what else?
Keep on. I count on him.
to manage.
It’s getting colder.
(iv)
In this savage cold
he sleeps, it seems,
somewhere else
I hope, but because
it’s Martin Luther King Day
—he looks like M.L.K—
his gear is topped
with an American flag,
its frail flagpole
tied by red string
suspended from a nail
or crack overhead
in the scaffold.
Let us salute his flag.
(v)
Above the black tarps
lashed to the scaffold poles
a shocking-pink dustpan
on a long handle makes
its dominion—
or made it.
Today it’s gone.
Where does he take it?
What dust scrape into it?
(vi)
Walking south on First Avenue
from East 37th street I came
to East 34th — big intersection.
On the corner stationed as if
to be picked up soon, a black
tarp-bundled shopping cart
or rather a skid, rope-bound
like the one under the scaffold,
with black garbage bags too—
a monument, spontaneous sculpture,
a statement. Does it go unread?
Next to it, farther along
on the gray concrete,
another stony-black block
in public storage. By it
a man lies sleeping.
Is this city art unseen?
Passersby sweep their eyes
carefully over and away.
This free space must be
preserved for them, I think.
That little we can do.
Not happy with this thought.
(vii)
Yesterday noon coming down our stoop
I glanced away from the man
under the scaffold. He didn’t want
to be seen pulling a comforter,
fluffy, cream-colored, out of his stash,
not seen as he sets himself up
to sleep.
Will he pull the black tarp
over himself, and look as if
he is only the package on the sidewalk?
I head off the other way
past the brownstones with stained-glass
doors and marble-paved front steps
whose owners have gone south for the winter.
(viii)
Three snapshots:
Snap one:
9:00 p.m. a blonde woman
stands talking to the man
under the bare light-bulb
Snap two:
6:30 p.m. he sweeps litter
out of the gutter.
Four young men, Ivy League,
shriek and dance in the street
Snap three:
midday no sign of him
stash disarranged,
flag points downward.
Did he hear Trump’s speech?
(ix)
The black monument is tidy today,
heavyweight contractor bags tightly strapped,
two shocking-pink dustpans with green handles
propped on the brick wall under the scaffold
tucked in behind, meant to be inconspicuous—
23 degrees and getting colder—
he must have gone to—
where?
(x)
Dusk. Stepping out of a taxi
I can’t see
the black heap
in the shadows cast
by the lamp
at a defunct
doorway
or possibly defunct:
earlier there
workmen jackhammered open
a square of sidewalk
three feet deep.
For now, it’s closed up.
We’re all safe, I guess
(xi)
The black monument
hunkers down
by the building
that’s going
to waste, empty,
decomposing to dust.
The gray-dusted black hoard
chained to a scaffold pipe-post
waits, gathered
to be taken
to better living space.
Or no.
The black bags
don’t go anywhere.
Not yet.
They’re discards saved
to show that someone
owns them:
“I own, I save, I come
to check;
therefore I am.”
(xii)
He is.
He is where
he is.
He is many.
They are where
he is,
seen everywhere
we are and where we
are not,
sealed doorway
unused doorstep
subway hallway
Sixth to Seventh Avenue
here or there
a bundle of one
or two lies
face aside—no socks,
piss-smell—
we go fast.
We go where
they are not.
They sleep
underground,
trade off safe
for warm
maybe find a
begrimed friend
to trade words with.
That’s not so small
a thing where
they are, and
we are, each one
a grain of gravel
blown into the wind
away though
there is no
“away”
(xii)
Today a white plastic bag
that hangs on the side
of the packed cart
has been torn open as if
by a marauder, man
or dog, for a part of
a sandwich, a few chips,
messed-up food bits, not
much but not theirs. It’s
not right, even if only
a squirrel or bird
swept down from the scaffold
to eat—not right that
so much goes unprotected.
It’s a street story
I read too often, obsessed.
It’s not right—
but someone must see
(xiii)
Saw him at noon at his stash.
He wears skier’s padded clothing
tight, insulated, logo on the sleeve
—action man!—opening a can
or jar, food maybe.
I look away
so he feels safe, maybe—
(xiv)
Monday 9 p.m. quiet night,
holiday over, few cars
along the avenue
bought a chocolate bar
at the newsstand
on the way home,
tucked it under a flap
in the black tarp. Groan
UH—UNHH
Good God, he does sleep there—
“just something
for when you wake up”
Felt bad.
Now he feels unsafe—
(xv)
Mr. President,
I am an American veteran of wars abroad,
who sleeps concealed as trash
under the scaffold
in the half-coffin I’ve made
outside of your real estate,
my hope for the future not yet quite
turned upside down
On the brick wall of my bedroom
a mural of my neighborhood
painted by P.S. 40 students
displays my protectors:
the school crossing guard
the mothers with strollers
the kids themselves with glasses, backpacks
the streetlight’s yellow pole
commanding “stop!” and “go!” for safety,
the old lady who totters and obeys the law.
The scaffold turns at the corner
onto the avenue where huge trucks roll
food, fuel, appliances toward
the tunnels and bridges that stand
stable in deep waters. They supply
everyone’s needs.
Your destroyer’s pen,
Mr. President, doesn’t destroy them.
The suppliers are practical, work around
the pasted warnings “Keep out”.
Passersby maintain the sidewalks
on which they walk. The newsstand sells
flowers and The New York Times.
Headlines: women sue, hostile climate,
run for Senate—
Mr. President,
I am an American woman
who sleeps in the building
next to the scaffold, across the street
from Eve the Psychic—$5 readings—and
the Korean full-service laundry.
I am a veteran of hidden wars.
I claim reality as my estate.
I am the other millions.
We read signs. We clean fully.
A rain-cloud is rising over your golf course, Mr. President—
“Look!
We are coming through—”
January 12-February 5, 2018
Traverse by Jane Augustine, published by Dos Madres Press,
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Perhaps some of the most stunning poetry I have ever read. Thanks, Persimmon Tree, for this choice.