The competition for this issue of Persimmon Tree elicited nearly 270 unpublished poems by ninety women over the age of sixty, writing about their experiences and observations in poems that varied in subject and form. One of the pleasures of judging such a contest is discovering good writers previously unfamiliar to me. Another is finding poems that stick—their images arresting, their language ineradicable, their journey worth the ride.
The best of the entries appear below. As you’ll see, these ten women offer poems that underscore the potential power of poetry to evoke felt experience. While the titles of these poems are relatively simple—half comprise only single, mostly abstract, words (sustenance, ant, caution, depression, solstice)—the poems themselves are anything but simple or abstract. Each offers up a microcosm of the recognizable world, delivered astutely by a percipient and talented writer.
I’ve arranged the poems alphabetically, according to the last name of the author. They are followed by a recent poem of my own, included in Woman in the Painting(Autumn House Press, 2006).
On the beach a man reads, munches
sunflower seeds. A woman walks,
feeds seagulls morsels of stale bread.
In the distance vultures hover
over a heron’s carcass, crouching below
a cloud-streaked sky alive with cormorants.
Grebes bob to their own hunger-music.
Pelicans glide through rising air, then dive
straight into the sea. Again and again
they make the world obey their own
understanding. All this, and my world is (sometimes)
only as wide as your hips lying beside mine.
— an insect noted for its ability to carry objects heavier than itself
My worries skitter
like ants busy
with their own agenda.
They feed themselves
while I watch.
Little black commas
They build mountains
from grains of sand,
are at once weightless
find miniscule openings
from which to come and go.
Certain ones can destroy
an entire house
or a crop or a forest.
Her Good Eye
If then, the light inside
you is dark,
you will turn toward fog as if it were a strike
of lightning in a summer storm.
Your strength, a form of memory.
Of the good
muscle knit in nerve
like the natural
yarn at the wool shop, which needs just enough
between the needles to make the perfect
Cezanne painted until
his eyes bled—
The spider spins her slight
web against the dying
sunset, her good eye making measure
of the beautiful,
the sun-lit stuff
in which gnats twinge to their death.
I sit very still, watching
all that hurt, as if I know
what good is.
The Palace at 4 AM
Two-year-old Ruth wants to know
Do you have a sunroom?
That’s okay. The men
will bring you one. An idea
full as the palace at 4 AM
through which events drift
like swags of pale chiffon, snag
now and then on an upright
or cling with some deliberation
to the occasional horizontal.
I wander through, wanting voices
— my mother’s especially—
remembering loved men, islands
low in cold green seas, cities,
and banana plantations,
cloudforms in tropic skies,
high windswept treeless country.
Gardenias. Orange groves.
Music of the Spheres
Too many to name, the stars we know have been
numerically coded like stickered supermarket
fruits, or salaried workers.
Yet they sing on.
Ancients guessed all heavenly bodies intone
pure ratios of harmonic intervals within
revolving celestial shells, inaudible
to ears not tuned
to the music of the spheres.
Now the Internet offers us star tones caught by
scientists who seek to know the intricate
instrument that is the universe
by analyzing its sounds.
HD49933 keens like wind off the rear thrusters
of a starship lost in space. HD181420 sounds
the echo of eardrums under bottomless
seas, or a blizzard’s hollow
exhale into nothingness.
The buzz of a globular star cluster could stand in
for a string section warming up until, finding
a tune that wanders up one step and down,
it slips into dissonance
and slides off minor, as all things must. Even our sun
pulses its reedy hum in the random vacuum of
beginning/ending, as if a careless oboe
blowing over the mouth
of an empty bottle.
Linda Goodman Robiner
Free Fall: Notes to Myself
After Louise Erdrich
Ignore dust mites in the bedclothes
and frying pans heaped in the sink.
Throw out every lonesome sock
you’ve saved, hoping to uncover partners.
No more boned bras that scrape your ribs.
Overlook mountains of files muddling your office.
Get rid of locks on doors and hopes you cling to.
Open every window.
So what if your T-shirt has stains
from Nonpareils warmed in your hands
and cherries dropped
when you nibbled them in the car.
Lose the date book so your hygienist won’t plunk
that bite wing thing under your tongue
and the gynecologist won’t say that line
they all memorize the first day of training:
Scoot down a little.
Give up wanting to be beautiful
next time. There is no next time.
Memorize the woods.
Watch long enough to see fern fronds unfurl.
Encourage the night to have its way with you,
know that darkness, too, longs to be held.
Mary Kay Rummel
Names for Green
In the beginning roar and bloom
apple-skin of sea.
in the current of timothy grass,
the long emerald bodies of conifers call.
Beneath the cow-hoof greening
wend of morning,
see what was wrinkled, smooth,
what was withered, strong.
We will become what we are—
part fern, part birch
on a Picasso earth,
a simultaneity of greens.
An onslaught—always one more
hill dotted with lambs, wool tufts
poking though a comforter.
And in between
such wind-noise of naming.
Let me hold you then in sage,
stem and stamen.
We will enter the brief
cloister of cistercian night,
single-note moss like a moon tasting.
All of it light.
The water-skater walks the pond,
its image duplicated beneath it
in the dark water, it steps sure-
footed, from dimple to dimple.
The fingers stalk the mirror,
but cannot penetrate the surface.
Spider-like, they hover over
shadow twins, scratching hard air.
The hand searches for a key, always
in a certain pocket, finds only wadded
tissue, significance slipping from
fingers when the hand is out of touch.
Catherine Senne Wallace
Once you’ve been bitten by a snake,
you are very cautious even of a coiled rope.
The Dalai Lama
Once more we move from the cold
solitudes of Winter
into the solitudes of Spring. Like a
blotch of blood on snow
Memory stops our steps even
before April’s abandon.
Why this ache— this chair-on-chest
pressure that settles pillow-deep into thin
It’s still the same— the sickness
that sulks just under skin.
It’s a difficult script— we both know
We both know better
than to say them.
M.J. Werthman White
The owl in the wood behind the house,
hungry raptor, has been busy overnight:
on the brick patio this first summer morning
I see a scatter of dusty dun-colored feathers
from passer domesticus, one of the house
sparrows nesting in the eaves above me.
It looks almost as though the little bird,
overcome by a desire to divest itself of its
plain brown wrapper, had simply undressed
instead of being done in by him of the reedy,
eerie, repetitive call, loneliest sound on the planet,
insomniac’s three o’clock-in-the-morning reminder
that her life is written in sand, in smoke, in water,
is in fact at this very moment being traced
in already-disappearing condensate on a fogged
window pane in some seldom-used room.
Later in the day on the bike path a bluebird,
purported sialia sialis of happiness, darts
to and fro in front of me before touching down
on the blacktop. It does not stick around.
Andrea Hollander Budy
One of the regulars had cancer
in those days before chemo,
and even after the beautician lowered
the hairdryer canister over the woman’s head,
she talked nonstop about the intense heat
of cobalt treatments, the way her body burned
in places she’d rather not name,
how her skin there felt more like leather.
When she paused, the beauty parlor grew
strangely quiet: only the hum of the dryers,
the occasional whoosh of water at the sinks.
Until she spoke again, no one looked at her.
Then she droned on, but this time
about her son, who’d stopped coming by
now he had a wife who had him
wound around her little finger.
I didn’t understand yet
it wasn’t his wife that kept the son away.
I was seventeen and only a guest
in this world
where my mother was a regular
on Wednesdays. That day she sat up front
among the women’s magazines.
After I was done, we’d go to lunch.
And in a few days she’d tell me
her own bad news. She’d say she didn’t want
to spoil my senior prom. But that afternoon
as the woman carried on and on and on,
she already knew what she knew.
Maril Crabtree lives in Kansas City. She has edited four anthologies of poetry and essays published by Adams Media. A Pushcart Prize nominee, her poetry has appeared in numerous literary journals, and her chapbook, Moving On, was recently published by Pudding House Press. She is poetry co-editor for Kansas City Voices and a board member of The Writers Place. She spends each February walking the beaches and estuaries along the Sea of Cortez near San Carlos, Mexico.
Penny Hackett-Evans is a woman of the Great Lakes Basin, having lived there most of her life. Retired from community-based ministry work, she has come late to poetry and this is her first published poem—about which she is delighted!
Eva Hooker is Professor of English and Writer in Residence at Saint Mary’s College, Notre Dame, Indiana. Her hand-bound chapbook, The Winter Keeper, (Chapiteau Press, Montpelier, Vermont, 2000), was a finalist for the Minnesota Book Award in poetry in 2001. Her poems have recently appeared in The New England Review, Agni, The Harvard Review, Salmagundi, Witness, Drunken Boat, Memorious, Terrain, Redactions, and Best New Poets 2008. Her poetry is affected by her experiences of the northland and of Lake Superior.
Deena Linett is revising a third poetry collection and has just completed a novel. Recent poems have appeared in Barrow Street, Chest, The American College of Chest Physicians, BigCityLit.org and laFovea.org. New work is due in The Comstock Review and The Literary Review.
Nancy Paddock is a poet and oral historian who lives and gardens in Litchfield, MN. Her poems have appeared in many journals and anthologies, including To Sing Along the Way: Minnesota Women Poets From Pre-Territorial Days to the Present; The Writer Dreaming in the Artist's House; and Beloved on the Earth: 150 Poems of Grief and Gratitude. Trust the Wild Heart, from Red Dragonfly Press, was a finalist for the 2006 Minnesota Book Award in poetry. She has just completed a memoir about her parents’ lives, Alzheimer’s disease, and deaths four days apart.
Linda Goodman Robiner delights in helping writers as an editor and workshop facilitator in the areas of poetry, memoir, fiction, and the healing power of writing. Hundreds of her poems, articles, and short stories have appeared in journals and anthologies. In 1997 Pudding House published her chapbook, Reverse Fairy Tale. With degrees from the University of Michigan and John Carroll University, she has taught at various colleges and universities in northeastern Ohio. Linda can be reached at LGRobiner@roadrunner.com or via her website, WriterHelper.com.
Mary Kay Rummel’s poetry collection, What’s Left Is the Singing, (Blue Light Press) is appearing Spring 2010. Other recent books are Love in the End (Bright Hill Press, 2008) and The Illuminations (Cherry Grove, 2006). Poems have recently been published in Poets Across Borders II (Gival Press), Nimrod, (University of Tulsa), The SHOp (Cork, Ireland), Lavanderia (San Diego City Works Press), St. Paul Almanac, and Turtle Quarterly. Her short fiction appeared in Double Lives (Wising Up Press). She is a professor emerita from the University of Minnesota. Her website is marykayrummel.com.
Elizabeth Schultz, retired from the University of Kansas in 2001, balances scholarship on Herman Melville and on the environment with writing essays and poems about the people and places she loves. Recently, she has published a memoir, Shoreline: Seasons at the Lake; a nonfiction book The Nature of Kansas Lands; two collections of poems, Conversations and Her Voice; and a collection of short stories, The White-Skin Deer: Hoopa Stories. In 2007, she was a Distinguished Fulbright Lecturer in American literature in Beijing and in 2008 returned to co-organize an international conference in ecocriticism.
Catherine Senne Wallace experimented with various grown-up activities in her first few lives: English teacher to less-than-enthusiastic flower children of the ‘70s; account executive in the three-martini-lunch world of advertising; and communications manager at a bank that took itself much too seriously. Now she teaches at an Edina MN middle school in the autism spectrum program, trying to make a difference in this very strange world, one child at a time. Her poems have appeared in numerous journals, newspapers, and anthologies, most recently in Beloved on the Earth: 150 Poems of Grief and Gratitude (Holy Cow! Press).
M.J. Werthman White took up writing at fifty after a 30-year hiatus. Since then, her poetry has appeared in local journals, The Dayton Daily News, The English Journal, and Main Street Rag. One of her poems won the 2006 Paul Laurence Dunbar Poetry Prize. In 2009 Billy Collins chose her poem as the adult winner of Borders' online poetry contest. She is retired after 31 hectic but satisfying years spent teaching mostly first and second graders, and lives with her husband and dog in Xenia, Ohio.